I saved you
From that culling blade
In my friend's hand.
I smuggled you
From that dappled glade
In that hostile land.
I moved you
To your sundrenched home,
Your new resting place.
I nourished you
In rich, dark loam,
Sun on your face.
I watched you.
Your shoots grow tall
With statuesque power.
I loved you
Winter, spring, summer, fall,
Seven years, no rewarding flower.
I spurned you.
Let the rain rain,
Let the sun shine.
You surprised me.
Spring came round again
A bloom, a sign.
You mocked me,
Mocked my age
My fertility, ironic.
You saved me
From a dark cage
From myself, a tonic.
Sharing with Björn on dverse and his tree prompt http://dversepoets.com
And
The lovely people at Poets United, for Poetry Pantry http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.co.uk
sure was nice taking us through this germinating process; have a nice Sunday
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Hope yours was a good one.
DeleteTake care Gillena
interesting the mixed feelings you felt at the bloom...i wonder too if that is not the same with us and kids as well...investing in them until they bloom and leave us....
ReplyDeleteI've never felt like that when mine have left home, excitement and nerves, but sometimes when they have shown magnificent disregard for your feelings, well. ...
DeleteThe journey of the tree..hope it blooms in the spring..
ReplyDeleteIt has one last journey to make, we'll see.
Deletelove this process of creation of beauty.....and the cute title :)
ReplyDeleteI'm always saving stuff from re landscaping projects or building sites. My husband has put a ban on more trees though.
Deletea vice versa saving....that sounds good... i once saved a little walnut tree and for me it still is the most beautiful tree in the world...
ReplyDeleteOh Claudia that is marvellous.
DeleteGlad the tree finally bloomed. I don't understand how it mocked you. Maybe it was just trying to teach you patience, which you demonstrated well. Nice write.
ReplyDeleteMyrna, let's just say that it chose to bloom and flash its fertility when I was ill and facing the surgical loss of mine
DeleteA tonic indeed. great words.
ReplyDeleteUltimately it was very rewarding.
DeleteOh this is really nice.
ReplyDeleteI like the sort of giving, unconditional love contained in this section:
I loved you
Winter, spring, summer, fall,
Seven years, no rewarding flower.
I spend a lot of time in my plant hospital. It's very rewarding.
DeleteDid you grow it from a seed?
ReplyDeleteLovely to think of it as a baby that needs nurturing.
I wonder which actual kind of tree you have in mind.
And the dappled glade makes for a nice image too.
It was a tiny lilac. I tried to save quite a few from my friend's landscaping project, most didn't make it.
Deleteyou penned Natures process and took us through it step by step...great write Pea...
ReplyDeleteThanks Robert
DeleteThis is the way of some trees - it takes them a while to bloom, just like some humans:) I really love this tree poem!
ReplyDeleteAin't that the truth. Thanks.
DeleteOh! That is really nicely done. The rearing of a tree child... how wonderful and the entire wait and process is very well pictured in your words.
ReplyDelete-HA
Nothing is more fascinating than to observe nature...you have captured the germination beautifully in your write. I loved the lines:
ReplyDelete"I loved you
Winter, spring, summer, fall,
Seven years, no rewarding flower."
Ankita, I love gardening and rearing my plants from seeds and cuttings.
DeleteWhat is the reward that we get from nature? Not a flower, but perhaps reaching deep inside us, springing us to life ~ I really enjoyed this ~
ReplyDeleteGrace, it does connect with me, spiritually.
DeleteI hope now that the tree has bloomed one time it will bloom again. I know some trees / flowers bloom infrequently. I would like to know what kind of tree this is.
ReplyDeleteIt's a white lilac, Mary. We shall see what happens this year.
Deletevery cool....adopt the pace of nature, her secret is patience -Emerson
ReplyDeleteSadly patience is not one of my strengths
DeleteI love that title too. Yes, nature surprises us sometimes...even in our impatience to hurry things along. Blooms and fruit take time...like our own growth. Loved this sweet poem.
ReplyDeleteIndeed nature often works very slowly. My latest project is growing orchids, two years and I'm just seeing success.
DeleteHow wonderful to nourish a tree like that.. wonderful.. and the end, almost like an anticlimax... you managed to keep a suspense through your lines that I really liked
ReplyDeleteAh Björn, the end product was so much better in reality.
Deleteinteresting thoughts... loved it!
ReplyDeleteNatasa, thank you.
DeleteBeautiful poem about nurturing and then allowing something (a tree, a child?) to grow strong and bloom on its own.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, it really is about a tree.
DeleteI like the use of mixed feelings, confusion...maybe in the end nature is its own reward?
ReplyDeleteRonald, for me, absolutely.
Deletethis reminded me that once my youngest and I were in a store and a lady came up to us and handed us a small pine tree. We brought it home and then stashed it with Grandma who always had a green thumb. When Grandma died, we took the tree about three feet high and planted it in the yard. We sold the house, and once driving by I noticed the tree was about 12 feet tall.
ReplyDeleteOh that's brilliant, what a great thing she did. Glad it's still going.
DeleteA bloom, a sign.
ReplyDeleteYou mocked me,
Mocked my age
My fertility, ironic.
You saved me
From a dark cage
From myself, a tonic....
...I liked how you ended this...nicely done.
You are very kind to say so, thank you
DeleteI love how you brought this full circle...the nurturer becomes the nurtured.
ReplyDeleteHow kind of you to say so, thank you.
Delete...these acts of kindness & care, if only realized by many, can make a big difference in this world where everything seemed to be already improvised... i loved this... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThanks Kelvin, what can I say I just love trees!
DeleteInteresting that it is seven years, as in the feasts and famines of OT Joseph's dreams or the seven-year itch that is supposed to wreck marriages but never has wrecked a true marriage. It reads like a parable. Otherwise I would apply its ingredients to my Christmas cactus that hasn't bloomed these five years. I will keep it a few more, but I don't believe in it any more.
ReplyDeleteSusan, I hadn't made the 7 years connection, it was growing, just didn't bloom for 7 years, then I moved it to my alpine garden et voila, flowers!
DeleteThere is a duality here that is very intriguing. Could be about a person as much as a tree. So beautiful a write.
ReplyDeleteYou are right, it has a duality, it is about my relationship with the tree, I think that is why.
DeleteAh, so many things we do are without reward.
ReplyDeleteYou have been very persistent with this tree. I admire your patience. How rewarding it must have felt when it finally bloomed. I also liked the metaphorical aspect of your poem, the idea that it can take years to bloom.
ReplyDeleteIt can and does often take nature an age to bloom.
DeleteSome take longer than others, but then the blooming is usually worth the wait,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Elizabeth, it was truly worth it.
DeleteYour poem proves a belief I have long held... gardening nurtures the soul.
ReplyDeleteKim, it definitely nurtures mine.
Deletea good progression, and at the end, hope ~
ReplyDeleteWell, Keep hoping, I would like it to bloom again.
DeleteMetaphor of life..expressed in a wonderful manner !
ReplyDeleteYou are too kind, thank you.
Deletenice rhymes!
ReplyDeleteinteresting title too. i don't do much gardening (not now anyway) so it's always good to read about such activity in a poem. :)
Thanks my dear!
DeleteNice. We all need saving in one way or another.
ReplyDeleteAin't that the truth!
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