Saturday, 11 January 2014

Fire



Immortal flames,
Omnipotent power,
I yearn for your touch.
I submit myself to you,
A supplicant at your feet.
Occupy me,
Engorge my core,
Discharge your searing pain within me,
Consuming my all,
Kindling new life.
Joining with Poetry jam and the prompt fire
http://poetryjaam.blogspot.co.uk/2014/01/fire.html
And
the midweek motif on poets united,  prompt newness
http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.co.uk/2014/01/poets-united-mid-week-motif-newness.html


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25 comments:

  1. Mary11 January 2014 at 18:23

    A powerful plea here, Pea! Nice to see you in Poetry Jam this week!

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    1. Pealogic12 January 2014 at 18:16

      Hi Mary, attempting irrationality.
      Nice to be here.
      Ciao
      Pea

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  2. alan170411 January 2014 at 19:53

    I love this , passion, power, desire all in this, quite engaging. Great poem

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    1. Pealogic12 January 2014 at 18:17

      Thanks Alan, glad the passion came through.
      Ciao
      Pea

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  3. Kathryn Dyche11 January 2014 at 20:15

    Oooh evocative and extremely powerful. I love it.

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  4. Susan11 January 2014 at 21:14

    Powerful. I have always loved the paradox of being consumed into new life.

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    1. Pealogic12 January 2014 at 18:20

      Susan, it is a paradox isn't it? I wouldn't fancy this type of renewal myself.
      Ciao
      Pea

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  5. Unknown11 January 2014 at 21:32

    Your words burn with passion!

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  6. Brian Miller11 January 2014 at 23:13

    wow...intense for sure...the commitment in your words speaks volumes...

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    1. Pealogic12 January 2014 at 18:21

      Brian, thanks I was hoping for intense!
      Ciao
      Pea

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  7. Mary Ann Potter11 January 2014 at 23:42

    Cleansing and kindling --- powerful juxtaposition!
    Love your presentation, too, with that dramatic photo.

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    1. Pealogic12 January 2014 at 18:22

      Mary Ann, glad you liked the poem and the photo. It's one of my favourite photographs.
      Ciao
      Pea

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  8. Peggy12 January 2014 at 01:49

    Lots of fire power in this! Thanks for posting at Poetry Jam.

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    1. Pealogic12 January 2014 at 18:23

      Peggy, powered by the fire.
      Nice to see you.
      Ciao
      Pea

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  9. Myrna R.12 January 2014 at 02:25

    Lovely and passionate. Transformation by fire - your words read like a prayer.

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    1. Pealogic12 January 2014 at 18:24

      Myrna, I think subconsciously I could hear a prayer in my head.
      Ciao
      Pea

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  10. Laurie Kolp12 January 2014 at 15:39

    So powerful!

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  11. Intelliblog12 January 2014 at 22:58

    Very well put with powerful images.

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    1. Pealogic13 January 2014 at 16:08

      Cheers Nicholas

      I appreciate your comments very much!
      Pea

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  12. Pealogic13 January 2014 at 16:09

    Thanks Loredana
    Indeed we do!
    Take care
    Pea

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  13. Sarav15 January 2014 at 20:46

    Excellent intense poem, perfect embodiment of fire---Happy New Year!! :-)

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