Friday, 22 November 2013

Life



The sun shone for the first time
In many days today.
Towering sentinels, tree guardians
Reached skywards to touch
Watery yellow skies
Laden with snow.
Breathe out, live again.


Written for Verse First http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.ch 

10 comments:

  1. The majesty of trees...I love your description of them as "towering sentinels". Beautiful!

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  2. Thank you very much Sherri. I love my trees, they are very protective of me.

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  3. when the sun shines after days of darkness ... it is like a new beginning...

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    1. Robert, it certainly felt like it, until the clouds unburdened themselves and the snow came.

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  4. This creates a lovely mood! I also love trees!

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  5. I love it! "Breathe out, live again."

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    1. Sherry, thanks. It was really how I felt

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  6. I love the optimism in this poem. Sun makes all the difference! The ending sums up your feelings wonderfully.

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    1. Mary, sorry to be so long in replying, I missed this. Thank you, the sun does make all the difference

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