Friday, 22 November 2013

Life



The sun shone for the first time
In many days today.
Towering sentinels, tree guardians
Reached skywards to touch
Watery yellow skies
Laden with snow.
Breathe out, live again.
Written for Verse First http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.ch 
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10 comments:

  1. Sherri B.22 November 2013 at 14:19

    The majesty of trees...I love your description of them as "towering sentinels". Beautiful!

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  2. Pealogic22 November 2013 at 14:53

    Thank you very much Sherri. I love my trees, they are very protective of me.

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  3. revelations22 November 2013 at 22:46

    when the sun shines after days of darkness ... it is like a new beginning...

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    1. Pealogic23 November 2013 at 07:57

      Robert, it certainly felt like it, until the clouds unburdened themselves and the snow came.

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  4. Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger23 November 2013 at 03:49

    This creates a lovely mood! I also love trees!

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  5. Sherry Blue Sky24 November 2013 at 03:15

    I love it! "Breathe out, live again."

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  6. Mary26 November 2013 at 17:45

    I love the optimism in this poem. Sun makes all the difference! The ending sums up your feelings wonderfully.

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    1. Pealogic11 December 2013 at 14:35

      Mary, sorry to be so long in replying, I missed this. Thank you, the sun does make all the difference

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