Monday, 18 November 2013
Alien monsters
Cowering across the river
With fear filled heart
Breath almost eluding me.
The monsters awoke.
Fiercely glowering
Those sinister clowns
Rose up
On spider thin legs
Stomping, wading towards me.
I ran south
Not looking behind me.
But heard,
Stone splintering, smashing,
Glass grinding underfoot.
Screaming.
Aeroplanes,
Screeched across the skies
Rat tat tatting, bullets flying.
Glass
And water
Cut razorlike.
I
sneaked a look behind.
Creatures downed, drowned.
Safe?
Linking to "Our World Tuesday" a view of London by an expat Londoner.
http://ourworldtuesdaymeme.blogspot.ch
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The brief lines accentuates the panic of an air-raid... love the sound of the guns being described... glad you are safe at the end
ReplyDeleteThanks Björn, really appreciate your comments.
ReplyDeleteyikes....def crazy to be in a war zone, be it aliens or...our own...def would be a very fear filled time...hey, you made it...smiles...glad you did...
ReplyDeleteI did make it, and live somewhere much quieter now
Deleteoh heck... i do hope they drowned and you're safe... felt like in a movie scene..so vivid...
ReplyDeleteIt's how I felt when I saw the monsters of new buildings dwarfing the beautiful historic buildings in London
DeleteOh very scary stuff...great descriptions and imagery here!
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, I was trying to covey the panic I felt
DeleteA great shot - they do look like alien spaceships.
ReplyDeleteI found them a little scary
DeleteInteresting picture
ReplyDeleteJarek, thank you. I found it very frightening
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