Tuesday, 17 December 2013

Dew



The frost god exhaled
His hoary breath coated leaves
Dew froze instantly

 For the prompt "dew" at Haiku Heights
http://haiku-heights.blogspot.ch
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34 comments:

  1. Magical Mystical Teacher17 December 2013 at 16:37

    What a visual!

    Desert Dew

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    1. Pealogic17 December 2013 at 20:22

      It was deeply cold when I took this, still is!

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  2. Anonymous17 December 2013 at 18:38

    Like it.

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  3. Maniparna17 December 2013 at 20:08

    I can almost feel the lines, brilliant..

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  4. Angelika Poe17 December 2013 at 21:13

    a nice thought in your haiku ... the breath of God ...

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    1. Pealogic17 December 2013 at 21:24

      Geli, I wish his breath was a little warmer!

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    2. Angelika Poe17 December 2013 at 21:30

      but of course he was warm, then was also the dew away and the sun came out :-)

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    3. Pealogic18 December 2013 at 07:31

      Oh bless! Maybe tomorrow.

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  5. cheryl18 December 2013 at 02:58

    This is soooooooooooo good Pea!!!

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    1. Pealogic18 December 2013 at 07:32

      Cheryl, awfully kind of you to say so. Thanks.

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  6. NataĊĦek18 December 2013 at 09:39

    really good, such a great image!

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  7. Balqis DBJ18 December 2013 at 10:32

    Indeed, this is an excellent Haiku. Your words and photo complement each other. Loved it! :)

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    1. Pealogic18 December 2013 at 13:22

      Thanks Balqis, glad you enjoyed my offering.

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  8. Jae Rose18 December 2013 at 13:24

    What a magical piece..small in itself yet conjured up a wonderfully expansive story ..

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    1. Pealogic18 December 2013 at 14:32

      Thanks Jae Rose, I'm glad you liked it. Take care.

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  9. Reading Pleasure18 December 2013 at 17:29

    Impressively written!

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  10. Anonymous18 December 2013 at 19:03

    that frost god
    should cover his mouth
    bad manners

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  11. Reshma18 December 2013 at 23:19

    Frozen is the flavor of the season, cleverly done.

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    1. Pealogic19 December 2013 at 08:53

      Oh yes it is, but I don't have to like it! Enjoy the season of good will, brrr.....

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  12. Amrit Sinha19 December 2013 at 19:35

    You built up a fascinating tale here .... wow :-)

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    1. Pealogic19 December 2013 at 21:33

      Amrit, thank you. Take care til next we virtually met.

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  13. Susie Clevenger20 December 2013 at 04:54

    "the frost god exhaled" love that...beautiful haiku

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  14. Anonymous20 December 2013 at 05:14

    That last line works for me! Great imagery!

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    1. Pealogic20 December 2013 at 08:03

      Patricia, thanks. I'm living that hoary dream!

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  15. SaFire20 December 2013 at 23:01

    Your words completed that lovely picture. But even without it this was an amazing haiku!

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    1. Pealogic23 December 2013 at 08:14

      Lol, you are very kind. The photo made me think of a mighty Norse God. Have a great Christmas.

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  16. Jyotsna Bhatia26 December 2013 at 18:52

    What a brilliant thought Pealogic.. Wonderful ..

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