Thursday 26 December 2013

Cliff dwellers



My line has ventured
From Moher through flat lands, here.
Cliff dwellers are we.
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Granite holds secrets
Buried prisoners in rock. 
Gifts of our ancients

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Ancient gifts entombed
Frozen messages in snow. 
Words, music, rhythm. 

Started for a prompt at Carpe diem http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.ch/2013/12/carpe-diem-358-cliffs-of-moher.html
And as it grew it morphed into the prompt Gift at Haiku Heights. 
http://haiku-heights.blogspot.co.uk
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12 comments:

  1. Balqis DBJ26 December 2013 at 17:04

    So beautifully written. Loved it! :)

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  2. Anonymous26 December 2013 at 19:23

    Your are my favorites from the "gift" prompt. These are deeply evocative. Well done set of poems.

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    1. Pealogic27 December 2013 at 11:23

      Oh Alice how lovely to be a favourite, thank you.

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  3. Reshma27 December 2013 at 00:20

    Hidden gifts,there is so much fun in unraveling the mysterious gifts :) Interesting take :)

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    1. Pealogic27 December 2013 at 11:24

      Reshma, life should have mysterious gifts, shouldn't it?
      Ciao
      Pea

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  4. cheryl28 December 2013 at 02:08

    You travelled well Pea and inhaled the journey, what wonderful Haiku

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    1. Pealogic28 December 2013 at 09:44

      Cheryl, I had great companions. Thank you, Pea.

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  5. Amrit Sinha28 December 2013 at 08:48

    Cliff dwellers ... I loved this ... awesome !!!

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    1. Pealogic28 December 2013 at 09:45

      Amrit so glad you enjoyed it.
      See you soon.
      Pea.

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  6. Maniparna28 December 2013 at 14:26

    Wonderful lines..a nice take on 'gift'..

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